One Week

[2.5/5 stars] This is a reasonably good film, but it could have been much more. It gives a good cross country portrait of Canada, except for the lack of people that make it great. It’s the people Ben meets that are interesting. We could have met so many more interesting people in this film along the way, instead of the ubiquitous musical montage. There were so many I lost count. Another problem I had with the story is even though Ben is actively traveling across Canada, a lot of what happens to him is largely passive, and exactly the same as his life before the trip. He doesn’t seek out adventure, but instead just lets it happen. There are a few times where he pursues what he wants, and they are the best moments in the film. About the narration, I get why it was used, but I’m not sure it was needed. It felt like a crutch.

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21-05-10 Forget Dramatica

20-05-10 Masters of Screenwriting Interview: Tom Mankiewicz

April 2010 [-]

27-04-10 A screenwriter's income

26-04-10 Finished rewrite #3

21-04-10 Rewrite #3 heading into home stretch

20-04-10 Avoid clichés like the plague

16-04-10 Subconscious writing

15-04-10 So you finish that brilliant script...

15-04-10 Rewrite #3...

14-04-10 Rewrite #3 update

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13-04-10 Rewrite #3 continues

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30-03-10 Francis-Ford Coppola's Notebook

23-03-10 Sage advice from David Mamet

23-03-10 Screenplay analysis

17-03-10 What's in a one sheet?

16-03-10 New Vermin draft done

15-03-10 To outline or not to outline...

15-03-10 Spec Script Sales 2009

12-03-10 Breath of fresh air

11-03-10 2010 Super Catalyst Emerging Screenwriter Award winners

11-03-10 Vermin page count from 120 to 104

04-03-10 Merging two characters into one

03-03-10 The Grey by Joe Carnahan and Ian Mackenzie Jeffers

03-03-10 Killing all my darlings

02-03-10 John Hughes scripts

02-03-10 Great notes from a pro writer/producer

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23-02-10 Abduction by Shawn Christensen

22-02-10 ATM by Chris Sparling

18-02-10 2009 demo reel

16-02-10 Hollywood Anonymous

12-02-10 Interview with Terry Rossio

11-02-10 27 golden rules of writing

03-02-10 Do you use index cards?

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31-01-10 Joe Eszterhas

28-01-10 To Write a Screenplay On Spec or Not?

28-01-10 The research continues

28-01-10 Superchannel Super Catalyst Update

25-01-10 Buried (the script)

25-01-10 The Darjeeling Limited

24-01-10 Buried (starring Ryan Reynolds)

18-01-10 Golden Globes 2010

18-01-10 Tales from the Script

15-01-10 Superchannel Super Catalyst

11-01-10 Synopsis Completed

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04-01-10 Scriptapalooza 2010

03-01-10 First screenplay's the charm for Single Man writer

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31-12-09 Secrets for Creative Professionals

13-12-09 Air Buddies shot

11-12-09 US Copyright registered

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02-12-09 Black Hole Remake

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20-08-09 Second draft is done

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30-06-09 Been a long lonely, lonely time.

15-06-09 Some great screenwriting books to read

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10-05-09 The perils of success

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28-03-09 Heading into the rewrite

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26-03-09 I'm finally done... the reading that is

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09-09-08 Simple straightforward advice

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28-08-08 Day two on the wet west coast

27-08-08 Time for a getaway...

12-08-08 A good day

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