Merging two characters into one

One of the comments I got back from a pro writer/producer regarding “Vermin” was there were too many characters in some scenes to keep track of. I am contemplating merging two into one. Unfortunately, it’ll be a little harder to achieve than just simple math.

The Grey by Joe Carnahan and Ian Mackenzie Jeffers

Finally got time to read “The Grey” by Joe Carnahan and Ian Mackenzie Jeffers. The screenplay is not an easy read. Very heavy, with a lot of action. If this had been from a first time screenwriter, it would likely be frowned upon due to the immense blocks of text. However, the story, about an oil rig crew trying to outrun a pack of wolves after their plane crashes in the Arctic, grabs hold of you and doesn’t let go. It’s a page turner to the end.

I understand Bradley Cooper, star of “The Hangover”, has signed on to star. That wouldn’t have been my first choice for the lead, but I’m sure he’s got the acting chops to pull it off.

Killing all my darlings

Well, I have so far excised at least 16 pages from my recent screenplay “Vermin”, while still retaining the driving narrative. Sometimes you can’t see the forest for the trees and a look from outside eyes is just what you need.

John Hughes scripts

Just ran across a good collection of John Hughes scripts.

You can find them here.

Great notes from a pro writer/producer

I just got back some immensely helpful notes on my most recent screenplay “Vermin” from a talented pro writer/producer.

I am in the process of reworking the script to accommodate some of the suggestions. I should have a new draft of the script by the end of the week.

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