My screenplay “Vermin” got two positive reads but didn’t place in the Nicholl Fellowships quarterfinals. However, it was in the top 20% of 6,304 entries. Still good in my view but I still have much work to do. I am pleased. The email with the news continues to be a class act. I wish more competitions were run with such professionalism.
Moving on to the next script now.
Posted by Lee Gabel - Jul 22, 02:23 AM




Specifically the “Bechdel Test for Women in Movies”.
It boils down to three simple questions:
My script Vermin passes this test with flying colours. And it’s a damn fun read, to be perfectly honest.
Does your script pass the test?
Posted by Lee Gabel - May 21, 07:11 PM




From Go Into The Story
“Here is a set of questions I think are important for a writer to grapple with and eventually answer during the prep-writing phase:
CHARACTERS
Who is the Protagonist?
What do they want (conscious goal / external world)?
What do they need (unconscious goal / internal world)?
Who is keeping them from that goal (Nemesis)?
Who is connected to their emotional development (Attractor)?
Who is connected to their intellectual development (Mentor)?
Who tests the Protagonist by switching allegiance back and forth between ally and enemy (Trickster)?
PLOT
What is the story’s beginning (Opening)?
What is the end of Act One (Lock)?
What is the end of Act Two (All Is Lost)?
What is the story’s ending (Final Struggle)?
CHARACTER-PLOT
What is the nature of your Protagonist’s metamorphosis from Disunity to Unity?
Posted by Lee Gabel - May 21, 07:08 PM




There’s a really excellent interview with screenwriter Tom Mankiewicz over at Masters of Screenwriting.
Read it all. Very informative. You’ll be glad you did.
Posted by Lee Gabel - May 20, 01:26 AM




After reading about all these multi-million dollar script sales, I have often wondered how do screenwriters deal with their income. I posed the question to Scott Myers over at Go Into The Story and this was his response:
“I, like most working screenwriters I know, incorporated, what is typically referred to as a “loan-out” corporation.”
Read the rest of the article here.
Thanks, Scott.
Posted by Lee Gabel - Apr 27, 05:18 PM




All archived journal entries can be found below.
22-07-10 2010 Nicholl Fellowships
27-04-10 A screenwriter's income
26-04-10 Finished rewrite #3
21-04-10 Rewrite #3 heading into home stretch
20-04-10 Avoid clichés like the plague
16-04-10 Subconscious writing
15-04-10 So you finish that brilliant script...
15-04-10 Rewrite #3...
14-04-10 Rewrite #3 update
14-04-10 Yes, it's expository but...
13-04-10 Rewrite #3 continues
12-04-10 Rewrite #3 begins
01-04-10 The tradeoff
30-03-10 Francis-Ford Coppola's Notebook
23-03-10 Sage advice from David Mamet
23-03-10 Screenplay analysis
17-03-10 What's in a one sheet?
16-03-10 New Vermin draft done
15-03-10 To outline or not to outline...
15-03-10 Spec Script Sales 2009
12-03-10 Breath of fresh air
11-03-10 2010 Super Catalyst Emerging Screenwriter Award winners
11-03-10 Vermin page count from 120 to 104
04-03-10 Merging two characters into one
03-03-10 The Grey by Joe Carnahan and Ian Mackenzie Jeffers
03-03-10 Killing all my darlings
02-03-10 John Hughes scripts
23-02-10 Abduction by Shawn Christensen
22-02-10 ATM by Chris Sparling
18-02-10 2009 demo reel
16-02-10 Hollywood Anonymous
12-02-10 Interview with Terry Rossio
11-02-10 27 golden rules of writing
03-02-10 Do you use index cards?
31-01-10 Joe Eszterhas
28-01-10 To Write a Screenplay On Spec or Not?
28-01-10 The research continues
28-01-10 Superchannel Super Catalyst Update
25-01-10 Buried (the script)
25-01-10 The Darjeeling Limited
24-01-10 Buried (starring Ryan Reynolds)
18-01-10 Golden Globes 2010
18-01-10 Tales from the Script
15-01-10 Superchannel Super Catalyst
11-01-10 Synopsis Completed
08-01-10 New giant rat species discovered
04-01-10 Scriptapalooza 2010
31-12-09 Secrets for Creative Professionals
13-12-09 Air Buddies shot
11-12-09 US Copyright registered
11-12-09 WGA West registered
10-12-09 Back into the research
02-12-09 Black Hole Remake
30-11-09 How to get a development deal
05-11-09 Windows XP - Low on Registry Space
31-08-09 Just when I thought I was out...
20-08-09 Second draft is done
20-08-09 Righteous Kill
30-06-09 Been a long lonely, lonely time.
10-05-09 The perils of success
13-02-09 Contests contested
28-01-09 Going to read a few books
16-01-09 Time off for good behaviour
16-01-09 Good intentions be damned
23-12-08 I'm done the first draft
20-12-08 I'm going long
16-12-08 Page 62
07-12-08 The Number 23
03-12-08 Se7en
02-12-08 The actual writing
27-11-08 The outline, err... treatment is complete
26-11-08 The outline is getting close
05-11-08 Way to go, America!
30-09-08 Slamdance and the outline
24-09-08 Work on the outline continues
16-09-08 Progress on the outline
15-09-08 Slam Dance 2008 Screenplay Competition, part 2
14-09-08 The outline is taking form
09-09-08 Simple straightforward advice
06-09-08 The 2008 Page International Screenwriting Awards Finals
06-09-08 Sheldon Turner, Scott Rosenberg on Screenwriting
05-09-08 Slam Dance 2008 Screenplay Competition
04-09-08 Austin Film Festival Screenplay Competition
03-09-08 Heading home
30-08-08 The index card outline is done!
29-08-08 Making progress
28-08-08 Day two on the wet west coast
27-08-08 Time for a getaway...
12-08-08 A good day
12-08-08 William Goldman on Structure
09-08-08 Damn, what a week
04-08-08 Scriptapalooza Semifinals
01-08-08 2008 PAGE International Screenwriting Awards Semifinalists
31-07-08 Screenplay #2, update
31-07-08 Nicholl Fellowships 2008, Part 2
30-07-08 Nicholl Fellowships 2008 Update
30-07-08 Scriptapalooza 2008 Quarterfinalist
29-07-08 And so I begin...
21-08-10 Whiteout
15-08-10 Friday the 13th
14-08-10 The Invention of Lying
14-08-10 Law Abiding Citizen
12-08-10 2012
11-08-10 John Rambo
09-08-10 The Box
31-07-10 Inception
22-07-10 2010 Nicholl Fellowships
22-07-10 Sin Nombre
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